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All about IELTS writing (task 1, task 2)
Quvonchbek Xolmatov (IELTS 8.0)
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2023-01-08 13:48:19 What score would you like give for this essay?

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2023-01-08 13:45:35 Education plays an indispensable role in contributing to the prosperity and growth of a particular nation.It is argued that science subjects should receive more funding compared with other subjects. Despite this I tend to disagree with this point of view, as other areas of study play as crucial a role as science does.

It is an undeniable fact that these days and age, our life is changing significantly day by day and most domains especially technology, manufacture, construction and other sectors are improving dramatically because of teaching of science subjects. It is known that science consists of such subjects biology, chemistry, physics and computer science, and most breakthroughs are invented in medicine, agriculture and IT sectors due to studying them. Thus, some argue that more budget money should be spent on educating science subjects. To epitome, Japan's education system is the best system in the world and according to statistic information, in Japan, just over 70% of GDP and budget are invested to teach science subjects per annum. Consequently, robotics, medicine and automobile industries are better than other countries in the view of investing more money for teaching science subjects. Moreover, quite a few serious diseases's remedy are found in Japan and most technologies which are useful for our life are produced in Japan, as science subjects have already improved because of spending on budget money for these subjects. Therefore, examples like this clearly show that investing money for teaching science subjects plays an important role in the growth of a nation.


On the flip side, directing more financial resources to instructing science is limiting progress in other crucial sectors of a country. First of all, learning and teaching foreign languages should give no less attention than science subjects because of their impact on a nation's economy, politics and in general progress, as large- scale business meetings are conducted in foreign languages especially English and even science books are written mostly in English since the majority of information and content on t the internet is in English. Aside from languages, creative subjects such as art and crafts, should be seen as equal to science, for not all students are interested in science subjects, and it would simply be a waste of resources to invest in science more if this is the case. The role of art and craft is particularly noteworthy in keeping traditional values as well as traditions, through pieces of art from paintings to sculptures to songs. So, instances like this clearly illustrate that investing money for other areas of study plays as crucial a role as science does.

By way of conclusion, I do not entirely support the idea of funding science more than other subjects. While science plays an important part for progress in certain disciplines, it surely is not the key to economic, political and cultural development.

By Mr Quvonchbek

45 minutes.
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2023-01-08 13:45:35 More government money should be invested in teaching of science than in other subjects

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To what extent do you agree or disagree
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2023-01-07 20:42:10 What score would you like to give for this writing task 1?

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2023-01-07 20:40:34 Given is the  diagram depicting  the various processes involved in obtaining clean drinking water from rainwater in Australian town

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily  apparent that  the process has five main stages which starts with the collection of impure water from homes and ends with the distribution of purified water to the same abodes


The process commences with the collecting of rainwater from rooftops using drains. All households in the locality are fitted with such drains. The water thus collected from all homes is then made to pass through the water filter. The filter removes most of the impurities. Subsequently,   the filtered water is  collected in a large storage tank.


In the next stage,  the water in the storage tank is  directed to the water treatment tank via a pipe. In the penultimate stage, in the water treatment tank, the filtered water is treated with chemicals to make it fit for drinking. At the final phase of process,  the potable water is  sent to households via pipelines and is made available for domestic use.

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2023-01-07 20:40:34
What do you think about writing task 1?

Is it difficult or easy ?
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2023-01-07 09:08:55
Given is the bar graph comparing the milk export figures from three European nations in range of 2008 and 2012.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that exporting milk from Russia was higher than other countries over the span five years, while the export of milk was less in Poland than other countries from 2008 to 2012 . The export of milk was almost the identical in Italy between 2008 and 2012.

In 2008, The export of milk amounted 25 millions of tonnes in Russia which was approximately 8 millions of tonnes higher than Italy. In Russia, despite increasing marginally to about 30 millions of tonnes in 2009 the export of milk did not change in Italy and it was the same as last a year. In Russia, having increased considerably to 40 millions of tonnes by 2010, exporting milk in Italy had then seen a negligible rise to 20 millions of tonnes by 2010 and it was double less than Russia. In Russia, In spite of declining noticeably from around 35 millions of tonnes in 2011 to 30 millions of tonnes in 2012, in Italy, the export of milk had then showed a marginal rise from 20 millions of tonnes in 2011 to approximately 21 millions of tonnes in 2012.

In Poland, 12 millions of tonnes milk were exported in 2008 preceding decreasing marginally to 7 millions of tonnes in 2009.
5 million of tonnes milk were exported in 2010 prior increasing steadily from about 12 millions of tonnes in 2011 to 15 millions tonnes in 2012.

By Mr Quvonchbek
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2023-01-07 09:08:53
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2023-01-07 09:08:22 Introduction:

Opinions are diverged on which type of progress is important for a country. It is considered by most governments that economic progress is their most vital aim. Nevertheless, it is said by some individuals that other types of progress are equally important for a nation. In this essay, both of views will be articulated in the forthcoming paragraphs preceding coming to a reasoned conclusion and from my perspective, other types of progress are more important than economic progress for a country.

Main body 1


To commence with, a strong economy, according to those who espouse the former opinion, leads to sustainability of wealth. When the economy is strong, governments can rest assured that they have the power to rule the country without interference of strangers. China is a shining example of great economy in the world, they have invested all their workforce in favour of growing their economy regardless of common welfare. All the big companies in the world moved to the China to exploit their workforce as labour is considerably cheap there. It is pretty clear to everyone who has economic education that China is planning to rule the world by empowering its economy. This benefits only those in power and citizens are migrating to the US and Canada to benefit from better life quality

Main body 2

On the flip side, It is believed that to offer citizens better life standards it is crucial to treat and value other factors in the same way as economics.To epitome, empowering human rights is something that most people seek today, and the lack of it is the push factor for immigration in my country, Iran. People, even prosperous citizens, tend to go abroad as they do not feel safe here. Another important factor would be enhancing political relationships with other countries to keep travelers safe.


Main body 3

Last but not least, in my point of view social growth is another paramount factor that countries should take into account for promoting the culture and public awareness. Otherwise, they will fall behind in terms of education.


Conclusion

By way of conclusion, I am convinced that economic development is one of the several issues that should be considered by countries and not the only one and I am inclined to believe that a country’s advancement should contribute to economic, political, and social growth at the same level.

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2023-01-07 09:08:22
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