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2023-01-08 18:08:53 Writing Task 2

You should spend about forty minutes on this task

Write about the following topic

Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives.

What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Write at least 250 words

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2023-01-08 14:30:51 Band 9 IELTS Vocabulary for Academic Writing Task 1

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2023-01-08 10:00:10 IELTS ideas for "nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

>Reasons
>Positive
>Negative

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2023-01-08 06:01:20 Words to use in your essay

I think
In my opinion
It is possible to argue that...
One must consider...
It is credible to argue that...
The evidence suggests that...
It is reasonable to advocate for...

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2023-01-07 18:18:15 Ochish/sharhlash

2023-01-07 15:17:19 Answer by Simon:

In recent years, Extreme sports have become increasingly popular, and some people argue that governments should prohibited them. I completely disagree with the idea that these sports are too dangerous, and I therefore believe that they should not be banned.

In my opinion, so-called Extreme sports are not as dangerous as many people think. All sports involves some element of risk, and there should always be clear regulations and safety procedures to reduce the possibility of accidents. People who take part in Extreme sports are usually required to undergo appropriate training so that the dangerous are minimised. For example, anyone who wants to try skydiving will need to sign up for lessons with a registrated club, and beginners are not allowed to dive solo; they must be accompanied by an experienced professional. Finally, the protective equipment and technology used in sports from motor racing to mountain climbing is constantly improving safety.

While I support regulations and safety measures, I believe that it would be wrong, and almost impossible, to ban extreme sports. In the first place, we should all be free to decide how we spend our leisure time; as long as we understand the risks, I do not believe that politicians should stop us from enjoying ourselves. However, an even stronger argument against such a ban would be the difficulty of enforcing it. Many of the most risky sports, like base jumping or big wave surfing, are practised far away from the reach of any authorities. I can not imagine the police being called to stop people from parachuting off a mountain face or surfing on an isolated beach.

In conclusion, I would argue that people should be free to enjoy Extreme sports as long as they understand the risks and take the appropriate precautions.

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2023-01-07 15:17:15 Writing Task 2

You should spend about forty minutes on this task

Write about the following topic

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Write at least 250 words

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2023-01-07 09:50:09 IELTS ideas for "Advertising"

>Positive of Advertising
>Negative of Advertising
>Opinion about Advertising

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2023-01-07 05:50:01 Don't use the word for example

Use instead:
For instance
As proof
To illustrate
To give you an idea of
Suppose that
As a model
By way of illustration

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