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2022-07-19 19:12:39 #vocabulary Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:36 Writing Crash Course #announcement

After long consideration, we finally decided to launch a paid IELTS Writing course with Ulugbek Umidjonov.

Writing is the hardest section in the IELTS exam, and this is where a good teacher is extremely important. In our course, we'll not only teach you how to write awesome essays, but you'll also get detailed feedback for your writing (both Task 2 and Task 1).

Duration: one month (8 pre-recorded lessons & 4 live sessions)
Instructors: Ozodbek Botiraliev & Ulugbek Umidjonov (Writing 7.5 & 7.0)
Mode: online
Payment: 200,000 soms

Course description: There will be 8 lessons overall, and you'll have to write 8 full essays/reports. The lessons are pre-recorded, so you can watch them at your own comfort. We cover pretty much everything from Marking Criteria to Essay Types.

Deadline for registration: May 8

Interested candidates should contact @botiraliev_o. If you have any questions, leave them in the comments section. Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:36 We were with the Prophet (ﷺ) while we were young and had no wealth. So Allah's Messenger (ﷺ) said:

O young people! Whoever among you can marry, should marry, because it helps him lower his gaze and guard his modesty, and whoever is not able to marry, should fast, as fasting diminishes his sexual power.

[Collected by Bukhariy]

@ozodbek_SK Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:36 #mood Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:35 ​Clarity is the key to good writing.

What's the point of 'advanced grammar structures' and 'fancy schmancy vocabulary' if the examiners simply can't follow your train of thinking? This applies both to Task 1 and to Task 2. Here, check out this body paragraph written by one of my Writing students:

The proportion of American people eating in fast food restaurant several times a week varied between 15 % and 20 % throughout the period, while those attending there a few times per annum was 13 % initially and the last 2 years it increased by 2% remaining stable. By contrast, in none of these 3 years were more than 5 % of people in either the “ every day” and the “ never” category.

This is a nice (~)6.5 body paragraph, but it lacks clarity. Wherever possible, it's a good idea to keep things simple. Here's the rewritten version of the same body paragraph:

The proportion of people eating at fast food restaurants several times a week varied between 15 and 20% in the given period. In contrast, the number of infrequent visitors coming a few times a year, after a slight increase to 15% in 2006, remained unchanged. Finally, less than 5% of Americans never visited these restaurants, while the same share would frequent them on a daily basis.

Do you think the second version is easier to follow?
@ozodbek_SK Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:35 Here's Why I Love Andijan | Eid Celebration With Family

@ozodbek_SK Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:35 Start your day with dates, brothers and sisters. Eid mubarak once again!

(Protip: only have fruits and vegetables for lunch. Or better still, just drink water. Your intestines will thank you for it.)

@ozodbek_SK Ochish/sharhlash

2022-07-19 15:34:35 Here's the list of accepted students to Free IELTS 911. If your name is on the list, but you didn't get an email, please send a screenshot of your name in the comments section. (20+ correct answers) Ochish/sharhlash