2022-06-15 13:19:24
#IELTS Writing
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Some people believe ... while others think ...
Это типичная формулировка для эссе-дискуссии, где от нас требуется обсудить поставленную проблему/ситуацию с противоположных сторон. Введение мы начинаем с переформулирования задания.
Итак, как же можно перефразировать эти
some people believe:
Supporters of the position that ... argue that ...
XXX is seen by some people as ... (e.g.
Technology is seen by some people as the key to success.)
In some people’s eyes, ...
Some are of the opinion that ....
Many people state that ...
It is argued by some that ...
Some experts believe that ...
It is often said that…
Most people agree that….
Со второй частью –‘
others think’ также может быть множество вариантов:
... while other people see this situation differently.
Others, however, refute this, claiming that ...
On the other hand, it can be argued that ...
Opponents of XXX argue that...
Nevertheless, others are of the opposite opinion and believe that ...
However, this issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea.
However, XXX is a controversial issue against which there are also a number of valid arguments.
Посмотрим на примере.
Тема эссе:
Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children’s time is better spent on more academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Supporters of the position that physical education should be included in all school programs
argue that it is important for both the health of students and their academic performance.
Nevertheless, others are of the opposite opinion and believe that it is more important for children to focus on academic subjects.
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