2022-07-22 08:05:54
The line graph illustrates the rates of male and female smokers in Someland from 1960 to 2000.
Overall, while the number of male smokers per 1000 people declined over the period studied, that of women generally increased. It is also clear that throughout the span, the gap in smoking rates between both genders shrank and had almost converged by the final year.
In detail, by far the biggest rate of smoking was observed among males in the initial year, at 600 smokers per 1000 people. In stark contrast, the figure for their female counterparts was slightly more than 6 times lower. The rate of the former gradually fell up until 1975 (to 500 smokers out of 1000 people), whereas that of the latter reached its peak with about one in three women smoking.
After 1985, the trends for both genders witnessed noticeable declines, and by the end of the period the counts for male and female smokers were approximately 250 and 200 per 1000 people, respectively.
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