IELTS WRITING

2023-01-19 09:58:41 Task2
Nowadays, more countries banned smoking in public places. Offices, bars and restaurants are not suitable place to smoke. I completely agree to these steatments and I will try to write essay about it by my own views.

In public areas smoke cigarettes should be banned, because of their harmful gases and against to cleanliness. Cigarette's cinders and residues causes a violation of cleanliness. Besides that, smoking would export many illnesses, such us allergies, depression, headache, flue and another this kind of diseases. And by this reason work force diminish sharply and it effects to many problems. Than, list of grievences in a public places about smoking and bad atmosphere during work time takes main people's attention instead of another global problems.

Another thing is that the increase of smokers in public squares will have a negative effect on the sales and development of that place. Because there is obscenity and violation of human rights wherever there is smoking.In addition, young entrepreneurs always follow the example of state workers. If the younger generation sees workers smoking in public places, they will try to do the same. As a result, the number of smokers will increase dramatically, and this will become a global problem, leading to general air pollution.

In conclusion, presently, governments banned smoking in a public places. Because it has many harmful causes to workers and degree of place and people should follow this rule so that they don't harm other people unknowingly, and most importantly, everyone should know about human rights. Ochish/sharhlash

2022-11-23 08:11:21 The given line graph illustrates data about the percentage of household appliances, which were used in a given country from 1920 to 2019 and number of hours of household undertaken per week.

In general, looking from an overall perspectives, it is readily apperent all electronical appliances become more popular, in particular, refigaters and vacuum cleaners . The total time spent doing housework have also declined steadily and dramatically falled in the last one hundred years.

As regarding, refrigerators witnessed the most significant rise, beginning at lowest percentage in 1920, surging to more than 50%, by 1950. And then continuing to rise steadily until 100% around 1980. Vacuum cleaner strated higher at 30 percentage and than rose by precisely 20 per cent every 20 years until 1960 when growth ownership ultimately reached a hundred percentage in 1980. In contrast, washing machine began at 40 percent and climbed to 70 percent in 1960, then fell slightly, and recovered to finish the period at just above 70 percent.

The result of housework was that time spent washing clothes, preparing meal, cleaning the rooms fall steadily from 50 hours a week in 1920 to 20 hours by 1960. After that, the decline was more gradual reaching slightly above 20 hours by 2019

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2022-11-12 20:38:12 #Task1

The given diagram demonstrates the changes in the amount of acid Rain release in the UK, from four distinct categories (namely, Transport and Communication/Electricity, Gas and Water Supply/Domestic/other industries) over a seventeen-year period from 1990 to 2007. Units are measured in million of tonnes.
Overall, What is clear from the graph is that the total amount of acid Rain emissions dramatically decreased over the period in the question and Electricity, Gas and Water Supply witnessed a remarkable drop in this line graph while Transport and Communication factors remained stable in the quantity of discharge.
Looking at the deatils, as regards, Electricity, Gas and Water Supply were the main source of acid Rain release at the beginning years of the question in the UK with Just under 3.4 after that it plunged to around 1.3 subsequently, it saw a negligible fluctuation over a five year period between 1997 and 2002 at Which point a decline on this factor continued until in the end of the year. With respect to other industries group about 2 mln of tonnes of carbon emissions came from them. However it finished at about 1.3 with the similar fall.
If we look at Transport and Communication and Domestic as well. They produced a relative loww amount of releases at approximately 0,7 and 0,6 in turn. Throughout 17 years period both sectors experienced a gradual dip while Transport and Communication saw a steady levelling off pattern from 1990 to 2002. And this followed by a slight growth to 1 before dropping back to about 0,6as the amount from the beginning.

Word count: 266

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2022-11-12 20:38:12 Ochish/sharhlash

2022-11-12 20:38:12 IELTS Writing Task 1: line graph exercise
The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007 Ochish/sharhlash

2022-10-24 07:33:11 The two maps give information about the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2003 and today.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that The town of Kimsville has become much more modernized. In the past it was a little bit greener, with a hips of trees, but in today, many New buildings and transport facilities are added to this town.
One interesting change is that the trees on both the north-west and the south-west of Kimsville have been cut down and football stadium and New apartment have been built on their location in turn. In 2002, there was not any station for trains, yet the new one has been introduced near the city centre.
In the south-east of the town was a small forest-zone and that area is remained the same. An interesting development has been the introduction of a New software company in the east of the Kimsville instead of the Old factory which polluted the air. ‍ . Also the Old cinema which was located near the city centre has been modernized and turned into a pub. However the shopping centre in the north of town remained unchanged

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2022-10-19 03:55:57 #philosophy

If you look for perfection, you will never be happy

- Tolstoy

Indeed, we are meant to live this incomplete life. Don't think that every story should have a happy ending as it's how in fairy tales. We all lose happiness on the way of seeking perfection in worldly things which is completely untrue since nothing is perfect in the world, so is nobody. Just satisfy with the way you live and try to find that happiness in everything you look at and everyone you talk ...  At the end of the day, it's us to make this life worth living ( with good deeds ) Ochish/sharhlash

2022-10-18 17:46:03 https://t.me/+-pjxy7ZdRFhiNWYy Ochish/sharhlash

2022-10-14 09:27:12 This graph gives information about highlits results of an onlinr survey of 1000 prople they were asked about their firt -choice holiday accommadation.


Overall, what stands out from graph is that eight holiday accomadation was shown in questionnaire (hotel, with friends, campsite, hostel , bed and breakfast, motor home/caravan, cottage, rented appartment and others) and the number of place was hotel the most higher and the least place was rented apartment



  In terms of in firsr place was hotel the most prosperous accomadation to bed and breakfast with 170. Hostel was twice successful as bed and bedroom for people 100 people said they preferred to stay with friends, where it was higher than hostel. That off fourth activity was to going to hostel with 80


If we look at the percentage of people ranked in sixth place was campsite at 50 of people choosing it. This was followed by cottage and next came rented apartment with 45 and 15 respectively and others places were choosen by 40 people Ochish/sharhlash

2022-10-14 09:27:10 This bar chart shows information about the number of honeymooners who choose a destination in British in 2010


Overall, what stands out from graph is that the most popular destination for newlywed couples, while the bottom of the list was The lake district



  If we look at Tailand was the number -one destination, with 1410 couples choosing these, making it slightly more popular than Ball at 1335 couples. This was followed by venue was Costra  Rica with 750 couples spending their time. The Maldives headed of the list with 600 couples went to. Ranked in fourth place place was The Greek Islands choosing their romantic place.




  By contrast, The bottom of the list was Paris at 209, next came least place in Paris with 140. In last place was The lake district Ochish/sharhlash