Amirbek's IELTS

2022-12-27 09:07:02 In general, who do you think have more leisure time, men or women? Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 09:07:02 Do you think that people today have more leisure time than people in the past? Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 09:07:02 Do you think that leisure activities should not only entertain people, but educate as well? Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 09:07:02 How do people spend their leisure time in your country? Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 09:07:02 Do you think only old people have time for leisure? Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 09:07:02 How does technology affect the way people spend leisure time? Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 09:06:32 #Speaking #Part3
#Leisuretime Ochish/sharhlash

2022-12-27 04:31:30 #PersonalFeedback

Bu post judayam muhim bo'lganligi uchun o'zbek tilida yozdim.

IELTS Writingdagi CC (Coherence&Cohision) o'zi nima...???

• CC - mantiq
- IELTS Writing CC portionida Examinerlar o'quvchilarning LOGICAL THINKING (mantiqiy fikrlash), RELEVANT language ni tekshiradi. Ya'ni, o'quvchilarning yozgan insholari ham mantiqqa to'g'ri bo'lishi va savoldagi mavzuga aloqador bo'lishi kerak. Masalan : ko'p kandidatlar biror bir o'zgarishning foyda ba ziyonlari so'ralgan paytda bu o'zgarishning ziyonlari foydalaridan ko'proq deb yozadi - OFF-TOPIC javob. + ingliz tilidagi so'zlarning tarjimasi bir xil lekin ma'nosi har xil bo'ladi va IN DETAIL qilib tekshiriladi. Misol uchun, ko'pchilik task 1 dagi SHOW so'zini boshqacha usulda yozaman deb DISPLAY, DEMONSTRATE so'zlaridan foydalanadi lekin bu noto'g'ri ekanligini SHOW tugmasini bosib bilib oling. Hullas, bittagina so'z bilan CC dan 1 bal yo'qotish hech narsa emas. 5.5, 9, va o'zim yozgan essaylar o'rtasida ko'pincha idea bo'yicha farq yo'q : faqat shu idealarni to'liq ifodalab berishda farq bor. Shuning uchun idealar odatiy bo'lmasinu lekin odatiy bo'lsa ham uni mohiyatini hatto Pre-Intermediate yoki Intermediate darajadagi o'quvchilar oson tushunishi kerak

• CC - bog'liqlik
- Manbalarda ko'rsatilishicha task 2 da ± 13-15 ta gap yozilish kerak ekan (o'zim har doim 13 ta yozaman) . Bu barcha gaplar bir-biriga chambarchas bog'liq bo'lishi SHART. Ya'ni, bir paragrifning boshida bu trendning foydalari ko'p deb yozib, uni oxirida bu trendda ziyonlari ham bor deb yozish noto'g'ri : paragrif negative tomonlarni yozish bilan boshlandimi, negativelarini yozish bilan tugashi kerak positivelarini emas, yoki aksincha. Plus, CC ni oshirish uchun belgilangan miqdorda LINKING WORDS dan foydalanish kerak. Qaytaraman belgilangan miqdorda!

• CC - noqonuniy
- Essaylarni tekshirgan paytda, ba'zigi kandidatlarning insholarida noqonuniy fikrlar yoki so'zlar ni ko'raman. Bu IELTS Writing qismida ham...da ham minus bo'ladi . Chunki IELTS ham bir rasmiy imtihon. Idea yozyotganda MANTIQ, BOG'LIQLIK, VA QONUNIYLIKni inobatga olish kerak.

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Keyingi #PersonalFeedback hashtagdagi post nima haqida bo'lsin. Comment gooo... Ochish/sharhlash